Once upon a time their was a boy named Manu. lives on a Small island that has a big tribe that has a wayfinder he can read a book like a cloud. Then the olds said that we had to go. In the morning they went in they kinoes and went of with their food and water. In then they Saw the Beautiful big island it will be incrediball. and every body was happy. The end
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Tuesday, May 18, 2021
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ReplyDeleteI had a look at your 5 sentence story as i read it i saw that there is a full stop between Manu lives thank you.